WIR SIND UMGEZOGEN!!!!!

[Shak-K]

chea, dann mal los, kritik erwünscht, wenn sie konstruktiv ist, versteht sich

Stand up

I'm draped up, n maybe I'm too ordinary to heal life's pain
but old enough to know, the patches r just on of the same
Jesse Jackson was the man who said we nuthin put a quild
we just can live in sumthin big, sumthin big we build
you're just part of sumthin big the day u die no one would miss you
maybe u'll return one day but nowadays there's no issue
The white, blacks n hispanics r too egoistic to survive
to take the hands of each other, just to live a better life

It's an anthem to a god, he shall heal the ghetto called the world
gimme that feeling I am fine nd the population's doin good
and still I'm too lost in the words of this guy called Martin Luther King
What I mean is they might be the foundation of kind of sumthin that might begin
you see me wondering bout life changes, but at the end there will be no more pain
You dig, there's nuthin more to cry for and every child smiles, they left their sorrows out in the rain
we fight for everything we love, and find our peace layin in our graves
but to find some good stuff out here let's forget about the shapes

I was like stand up for yourselves and I heart no protest
so all those people standin out there just made my plans upset
I tried my best to keep this attitude strong and together
but then they handed me out a piece of paper- it was a no-shaky-letter
I don't understand why people don't trynna make those things better
Go Go, they spin around, get blown away like it was stormy weather
stand up like you the king and patch the pieces one by one
save every little piece like it was your onliest son

and everybody is a part of this there's no way to run
the way to make this world complete- it has just begun
one and than the two, everybody trynna make this thing work
stick together like glue, one by one, nd nobody got hurt
some days it makes me sick that these could never be the true
when I open up my door, look at the face of a child turning blue
but it might be, one day, when the quilt is ready
where I can see my mum again and I'm able to meet my real daddy

Life changes one by one and it's another dimension
I'm not a prophet, or poetic, so it's hard to get y'all attention
I'm just a white girl, living in a hole but I do care
wanna make the guns in iraq hush, and stop all those nightmares out there
I said stand up for what you stand for but do it together
stand up for what you want, maybe someday everything will be better
Stand up for better days, stand up for what you about
stand up for something true in the world and almost save a little love
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[prodigy]

geiler text... hast ne brutale steigerung in nen paar monaten gemacht... kann man sehr gut flown und es sind einfach geniale reime dabei...
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[Shak-K]

wenn du die steigerung auf den text im g-unit forum beziehst, das war n funtext ders mit m kumpel zam entstanden... gangstaaa verstehst du xD
ich hab schon lange so geschrieben, für mich, der text is auch schon 2 monate alt oder so. Ich halte was von deepness, verstehst du? Ich wollte so lang an der sache sitzen bis ich mir sicher war, jetzt haust du was raus, shaky, die texte sind okay.
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[prodigy]

naja, war mir schon klar das des nur funtexte waren... aber ich hab vor einigen monaten auch schon texte von dir gesehen, aber der hier war dagegen echt sehr gut...
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[Shak-K]

hm, möglich, kp. Ich schreib nur schon recht lange so, meine texte sind schon seit ner langen zeit eher sozialorientiert, weil sowas in der hip hop szene zunehmend vergessen wird. Vor allem gibtz meiner meinung nach zu wenig frauen die da drüber schreiben.
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[S.Word]

also was mir an diesem text auffällt (nch mehr als an dem anderen von dir) ist, dass du sehr amerika orientiert bist, du redest von whites blacks and hispanics, obwohl diese ethnische konstellation typisch für amerika und die dortigen probleme ist.auch ghetto kommen immer wieder vor, die wir, aggro hin aggro her in der form einfach nich haben. martin luther king kommt vr. alsowen du selbst keine ameriknischen wurzeln hast, frage ich mich, wieso du nich deine eigenen eindrücke verarbeitest, die du in deinem leben erfährst.

von dieser sache abgeshen, wieder ein sehr schöner text, sehr gute zeilenlängen und schön formuliert. gefühlvoll ohne ende optimistisch melancholisch!
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[Laura]

ich kann auch texte schreiben aber ich weiß nicht

nicht auslachen bitte!

[Laura]

Crackass can't bother me
Watch me get money with the double R team
Niggaz be schemin' about robbin' me
Chicks mad they ain't got this job like me
Money makin' bitch called beef
Million dollar itch, nigga can't stop me
Used to be broke and you used to love me
On tour, now you don't fuck with me
Uh, uh, huh, huh
Yo, yo, yo
Up late night, wanting to sleep
Thoughts of cats on their late night creeps
Cause of my relations with some one on peep
You should've kept it real and you would've been with me
You're still on the corner with Smoke and them
Still makin' plans about smokin' them
Stupid, running around and be poking them
Could've been on stage and not smoking dope with them

[w.white]

gun breed mal wieder
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[w.white]

[Shak-K]